A short story about a rabbit who didn't like to work together with the others.
This is my entry for "Day 71 of #freewrite" (PROMPT: Toothache) and also an entry of #story-300words Initiative (link) though it's far from the limit with only 138 words...
This #freewrite took more than 10 minutes in writing and editing!!
It's been a long time since I wrote a story with talking animals.
what they're called again? fables?
The Rabbit Who Loved Candy
In bunny village, lived a small group of rabbits.
They have a farm with a lot of greens, and they worked together so they can eat hay each day to live healthy.But one of the rabbits didn't work with the rest.
He didn't like the hay very much and so he didn't want to work on it.
The small bunny loved candy.
They other rabbit told him it's bad for him.
He should work together with them and eat healthy food with them.
But the small bunny wasn't listening.One day the small bunny tooth hurt and so his stomach.
The dentist bunny told him he ate too much candy and he has to remove his tooth.
The small bunny lost one of his teeth.
And he learned from his mistake and started working with other rabbits.[The End]
The Bunnies in Real Life Shouldn't Eat Candy
Their stomachs can't digest it properly, actually from my little search for this story they should only eat hay and green vegetables. Even fruits have a lot of sugar for them so they should eat them in moderation. (source)
What do you think?
I love reading people's comments on my stories!!
" The Rabbit Who Loved Candy" is a bit different than my other works but if you liked it you might like "On a Rainy Day" or my longer stories like "A Fascinating Legacy".