16 days of literature: Particle Ghost

{"And so, the early bird gets the worm but the second mouse gets the cheese" - Steven Wright. For one can risk, but to learn from other's mistakes are even better. To not is to make farce of the tragedy, for "first as tragedy, second as farce" as Karl Marx would put it. The grave of GWF Hegel tends to dialectically churn out great ironies of past tragedies; to positively supersede the tragedy by merely superseding the conditions and forcing the scenario to come up again. Yet outcomes do change when an event repeats itself, after all the repeater learns from the past but might become the dead mouse for which the other mice look carefully and learn from... Today contains many-a-things: two haikus, one from @vdux's own Haiku Contest and one of @bananafish's Mizu No Oto Contest, a three-hundred-worder-mono-paragraph for @vermillionfox and one multi-chained post for @bananafish's Finish the Story Contest... Today's music-aide: "Particle Ghost" [1.] from the Half-Life 2 OST.}

Banners by @f3nix

- Particle Ghost -

- Goat -

Head-rammin' for fun
- head cock'd straight, scannin' Nature
to eek lil' bahs.

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[Image taken by @marcoriccardi.]

Fluffy snug in fluff
"D'aw! Look at kitters sleepin'!"
Slink, tug, rustle, purr~

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Painting by the lovely @vermillionfox

- Blindin' affair -

Two fingers plunge into her cheeks, stiffly firm on the cheeks but to soon descend with the aide of skin. Slowly caressing each section of the face, the fingers softly fall and soon land unto the shoulders. A soft hmph escapes the mouth, but her smile to the unblinded one makes them more anxious to get it started. Their hand grabs one of her hands, her body in flight as their legs both ballet across the aisle; the wait was too much to handle beyond this point. Her voice-box gave voice to her shocked mind, her voice reaching out to her theyfriend, but they simply was too guided to getting to the end and not embracing the journey. Their free hand on the knob, the door moans excitedly and both bodies safely pass through in no rush. The door squeaking further open, her voice rang out again and their hands finally grasped the blind and delicately took it off. Again she was there with playing with her body as their cheeks was being painted red in hurried strokes. With the blind flying to the air, her eyes finally saw the gift they have tried getting for so long and her cheeks reflected her they-friend's cheeks. Her body springing to their hips, they collapsed to the floor but with her pinning them; a stare deadlocked the movement as the eyes relayed what their voice-boxes were failing to even eek out. Her head closed in on the small but emotionally ever-far gap, for which their head followed suit. A ba-aa-ah and purr pervaded the air, on equal tempo and intensity to the jazz of the couple's cupid scene. And while the scene is displayed without shame, they are their own blindfolds to finally enjoy a life that they think is worth living.

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- Prompt by @marcoriccardi -

It is said that Mr. Renhe Ren, of Daochu village, in the province of Quan Shijie, in his forty-second year of life, was seized by a great rage because of his long-standing enemy, who was constantly working to hinder and ruin any of his activities and projects. Faced with the umpteenth abuse, Mr. Renhe Ren felt that his harmony and self-control were going to be lost. He was no longer able to feel the noble sentiments worthy of a superior man.

Then he remembered the words of the wise man. "Sit down along the river bank and wait, sooner or later you will see the corpse of your enemy pass". So, he left the village of Daochu and went down to the river. He found a willow with a wide foliage that bent gently over the water, and sat down in his shadow, determined to wait until the wisdom of the ancestors had brought a solution to his problem.

He awaited for days and nights, meditating. Sun, rain, wind and fog alternated tormenting him, but neither the heat, nor the cold, nor the humidity, nor the insects distracted him from his waiting. Time passed, until one day in late autumn, the stream swollen for the rains brought a corpse to its feet, face down. Mr. Renhe Ren shook himself from his meditation and leaned towards the muddy water, his heart finally calm.

Great was his surprise when he saw…

- Ending by @theironfelix -

Himself staring back
- clear and sharp as he was
with his peaceful face.

Hands reached out to touch,
but only water ripples
with his disturbance

Fingers persisting
in the quiet of the day
- his mind wondered now

Not for why or how,
nor of the creek's creed in this
nor for what or where

For the eyes' quiet
did his fingers even made haste
- playing river tunes

The water jumped high
to then land deep in ripples
- which the fingers played

Now the murky gone
- lost somewhere else down the stream
and no more welcomed

His eyes scanned once more
and the light assisted right
- his head reared up now

Despite everything
it was still him - unperturbed
age dialectic

The frogs hopped lilies
with graceful flight in the air
- taking in the sunshine

The flies of dragons
buzzing all about the stream
- gentle the wind was

Chipmunks and squirrels
- nibbling hard acorns
under the nice shade-casts

Pretzel-crossed he was
with the fingers still plunged in
- hands flushed by the flow

Four watery tugs
- his head and eyes looking down
to still find himself

His lips cracked upwards
- the ancient smile repeat
seen in reflection

His body flopped fishy
as his arm sank to the depths
- physics abiding

Head sinking right in
before the rest, after arms
- yet mattering not

His reflection gaze
- but not a particle ghost
his mind and eyes saw

Bubbles came racing
from the mouth of the elder
- reflection reached out

Grasped by nothing
- yet his lungs ever-thankful
to not be flooded

He blinks his eyes once
with before him the great foe:
it is still himself

His arms stretched out wide
arching towards reflection
- stopping near the cheeks

His other hand follows,
acquiescing to restraint
poised by the body

The reflection copy
- nerves relaying the same thing
in near perfection

Heads twisting about,
torsos closing the chasm
- the water moves out

Noses touching on
- the eyes deadlocked in motion
finding a something

The fingers dancing
all over the hairs and the skin
- it was still himself

His eyes again blinked
with an expectation abound
- self-sameness in form

Yet now appears him
for which the water heats up
with passions stirring

But a hush comes through
and the elder's body quiets
- shame plaguing him now

Only one kiss lands
- the elder's eyes swelling with tears
of shame forgiven

His eyes blinks again
- no more of the rival man
but someone else now

His eyes irks in fear
- that someone's slap on his cheeks
forcing recognition

Doggedly staring,
a plea that bleeds from his eyes
- ghostly admission

The particle ghost
- despite the old customs then -
had her lips crack wide

He embraced by her,
returned back what he couldn't
when she despised him

Upon such lesson,
the river ejected him
- his body fishy

Patting off the dust,
his head and chin raised up high
- the sun staring back

The winds whistled high,
Nature refurbished her tunes
- a new happy found

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Two things: had to do some commitments but finally was able to make this and I gonna volunteer to help out an event in my community!!!!~

So's anything cooking this weekend for Victor? (Yes I shall repeat this as I already released a part of my name to the public of Steemit, thusly the internet as well. Also thusly is a word now by Victor GangTM.) Tomorrow shall be a story on the Carrion that I had delayed for a quite a far bit, not purposefully but due to convenient circumstances like introducing Spooky to the, now dubbed, "Felixverse" or my official slogan of monoverse, multigalaxy setting. (To rip but rephrase from Lorerunner's (from YT) Imperium setting where all fiction, or most of it anyways, existed in one universe but in various galaxies; the Imperium doing what it wants and modifying as need be. But sometimes it does act drunk and later rewrites the peck-ups that we just don't see.)

But realistically, I plan on probably releasing a poem on Sunday and enjoying my time at home again: doing stuff like reading, preparing ahead of time to relocate myself, arranging with some steemit users some meetups before I re-arrange that again when I do move and getting cozy with them but forcing the- [now being reprocessed by the SSS, or Spooky's Secret Services:] getting cozy with them by co-writing with them. I like to finally meet some of yah of those that I talked too about meeting up in the near future!!!!~

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Cited posts:

@vdux - Recent Haikucontest edition

@bananafish - Mizu No Oto, week 17

@vermillionfox - Foxtales, 33rd week

@bananafish - Finish the Story, 44th week

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@f3nix - Banners

@marcoriccardi - Mizu No Oto image

@vermillionfox - Her blinded figure drawing

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