"Pieman, spill the beans" a five minute #freewrite ("Big Bird" 3)

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This is a new series I started that followed on from an old freewrite I wrote called "Big Bird". It was voted by my lovely friends and followers as the story most people would like to see continued (to read first two parts see this post: @felt.buzz/it-s-my-party-and-i-ll-cry-if-i-want-to-a-five-minute-freewrite-big-bird-2).

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J anwsered the call on the third ring.

"This had better be important Pieman," he said, grumpily. He'd been calling me Pieman for a couple of months, now. It is true I had put on a bit of weight. At least he'd now stopped singing the song "who ate all the pies" whenever he saw me. And at least he'd dropped the old nickname from junior school: ShitPants. "What do you want at this hour."

I looked at my watch. "It's midday, J," I said.

"Exactly," he said. "Unearthly hour on a Saturday morning to be calling someone. What d you want?"

I coughed, looking at the mess around the floor. "I wondered if you were at my house last night. You know, for the party?"

There was a pause.

Then, "Party, Pieman? You been having a party and not inviting your J-man?" I didn't answer straight away. "Come on Pieman, spill the beans..."

I cleared my throat. "I don't know what's going on, mate," I said. "The bedroom is covered in empty bottles, and there is a bird in my bath-"

"You scored, Pieman? Well, done..."
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The next part is available here: @felt.buzz/photographic-memory-a-five-minute-freewrite-big-bird-4

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