Open Mic Week 5 - Original Song - Jaybird

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Hey all,

this is my Open Mic Week 5 Contest Submission. I know it's a bit late but better late than never. It's another Original Song (be it unfinished) titled "Cruel Intentions." I'm still working on this one, but I figured that by showing it to the steemit community I might be able to get some useful feedback and then apply that to the writing process (so don't be shy with your critics). I made a little video demo yesterday when I finished working on it. I'll probably post a final version of this one in the future once it's complete.

Couple of vocal flubs especially at the end when my voice died haha, vocals are too high. ENJOY!

I hope to make a proper recording of all these acoustic songs that I submit.

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Jaybird ~

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